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[Novarri's Zoneout]

Getting better

It may be repettitive, but it has a nice sound to it. I see that you got better musically, which that naturally happens with time on FL. Maybe as a suggestion that during some parts add a nice bell sound or a 3 note pattern going from a higher note working downward. Maybe some bass in it may work (just try different ones, filter, and reverb for a good sounding bass). A string (preferably one that slurs from high to low and high again and then vary it some) would sound really good. These are just opinions, but you are doing a good job so far. I am posting a new song this weekend called "Ego Trip" and it sounds way better than Orion (short), so look out for that. Looking foward to hearing your next song. Now to go play some Disgaea.

4/5

Matt (Ryukenjin)

Novarri responds:

Sweet, thanks. I'll play around with bass, strings, etc...see if I can't pull something awesome off next time. And I'll make sure to check Ego Trip out.

What the heck is Disgaea?

[Novarri's Paradox]

Great potential in this song

I actually rater enjoyed this one for one main reason, it shows great potential for future work. This really would sound great in the game "Well of Souls" because it sounds like some of the songs from it, not note-wise, but instrument-wise. Might I suggest trying to use filters and reverb on the main sound. It may bring the instrument sound alive (not to mention that you can make some amazing results when you comebine them having a gradual filter fade down and then gradually bring it back having a string or two going. Also a nice bass sound going in the back could be nice. Sluring notes from lower to high and back down is a nice touch you could add in the future. I know it is hard to use FL. As a fellow FL7 user I must say to just keep trying and you will make tremendous songs with practice. And again, I do mean it when I say I did enjoy this track, but I just did an honest rating due to some stuff that is lacking that can be easily fixed. And thanks again for enjoying my songs that I upload. It is hard when people zero-bomb songs that you work hard on, but I think that the opinions of others matters more than a score that people can drop at the touch of the mouse. Keep at it at I may want to do a colab with you in the future. Keep up the good work!

Matt (Ryukenjin)

[Quintosicated]

Kind of old-school videogame techno-like music

Reminds me of old music in Nintendo and Sega (with a little gameboy). Keep up the good work. Remember that crapy Max remix I made and you reviewed? I made that better, but havn't uploaded it because I am nearly done with it, but I DID upload a remake of "A" from DDR and went more original on it. I know you will like that one alot more because there isn't much repetition in it and it sounds better than the original song (in my opinion and a few other peoples opinions). If you can check that out and review it that would be great. I wanna hear from people to see if they think I have vastly improved. Thanks in advance